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    Personal Statement Review

    Line-by-line review of your full statement — the same approach I've used to help students land Medicine offers.

    £25 / statement
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    What's included

    Exactly what you get.

    No filler. Every session is structured, scored and ends with the next 3 things to fix.

    • Hook, structure, reflection and closing — all worked on
    • Tracked changes + comments so you keep your voice
    • One round of revisions included
    • Returned within 72 hours
    The process

    How sessions actually run.

    Step 1

    Read & diagnose

    I read your draft top-to-bottom and flag structural issues before line edits.

    Step 2

    Line-by-line review

    Tracked changes + comments on hook, structure, reflection and closing — your voice stays.

    Step 3

    Revision round

    One full revision round included after you've worked through my feedback.

    Step 4

    UCAS-ready draft

    Returned within 72 hours with a clear path to a final submission-ready version.

    Your tutor

    Meet Haroon.

    Interview & Personal Statement Tutor · QMUL Medicine

    Real talk — you'll be tutored by Haroon (that's me). I sat my QMUL Medicine interview and walked out with 89.5/100. My interviewer literally wrote on the feedback sheet that they'd recommend me without hesitation — the highest possible verdict, and one I've never seen given to another applicant. Every interview I sat this cycle turned into an offer. I'm not some random tutor reading off a script — I built every framework on this site from the ground up. If you want someone who's been in your seat very recently and knows exactly what gets you the offer, this is it.

    • Scored 89.5 / 100 at his QMUL Medicine interview — panel literally wrote 'recommend without hesitation'
    • Got an offer from every single medical school he interviewed at
    • Built every framework, mock station and feedback rubric on this site himself
    • Active in the UK Medicine & Dentistry community via TikTok @reapplicantmedh1
    Verified interview feedback
    89.5 / 100 at QMUL

    "Recommend without hesitation" — see the full feedback on the About page.

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